Thursday, March 3, 2011
Changes...
I changed the wording of my Found poem. After reading it a couple of times I realized I could use a different subject to make it mean more to me. Because the original poem did have the word dance within it I decided to change the subject to dance. This made the poem more personal to me because dance is such a large part of my life.
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It would be fun to see both the first version and the revised one side-by-side. I love that you made it more personal to you, changing lines to include dance and dancing.
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